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Remembering Scrooge

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When I was in pigtails, years younger than him, my big brother’s bedroom was filled to the brim New comic books, from the small corner store would light up his eyes, from the ceiling to floor Every nickel or dime, that he earned doing chores would be spent for the latest. A hundred or more My brother, the neat freak, a geek,... I would say would sort them, like treasures, kept neatly in bins His room was off limits, from small grubby, hands I was given such warnings, or my life was to end Of course, in ignoring….the rules I would bend... I loved, most, the skin-flint (That old duck that quacked!) I'm not talking Donald, in the blue sailor suit I'd choose Uncle Scrooge, holding big sacks of loot ! Perhaps because my brother, was a bit like that duck A skin-flint with comics….he hoarded his stacks! I never dared touch them, or war would be waged Dread if I tore one, or bent just a page! But there came on that day, that I'll never forget My birthday arrived, almost eight, I would bet I woke in surprise, for at the foot of my bed Boxes of comics....a present he said My “Big Brother, Scrooge”, with his heart so divine Had given me love, of the comical kind ! $ $ $ $ $ $ True Story! __________________________________________________ For Contest: Comic Book Characters Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton Revised 5/29/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/6/2015 11:07:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your Comic Book Characters win. Have a good one. SKAT
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Date: 6/5/2015 2:22:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/5/2015 10:27:00 AM
I like your outside the box take on "Scrooge," Carrie! Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/5/2015 8:21:00 AM
Uncle Scrooge oh boy yes Carrie delightful story congrats on placing hugs
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/5/2015 8:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, Shadow. This is a true story of my big brother's best side !! He has always been a good guy in the end !! Thanks so much for the honor to tell my story !!
Date: 6/5/2015 7:41:00 AM
Congratulations
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Date: 5/29/2015 7:47:00 PM
a sweet story, carrie, and very well told!
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Date: 5/29/2015 7:40:00 PM
oh my what a sweet ending to this one. He gave you a bunch of comic books. (maybe he had finally moved on his life and decided girls were his new "thing" haha) Great write, Carrie. Looks like another disgruntled non premium member below!
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Date: 5/29/2015 5:06:00 PM
Loved it as usual...Tell YOYO that you are likely in the comic character contest and if you are not...You just missed placing number one...
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Carrie Richards
Date: 5/29/2015 5:23:00 PM
Thanks again, Judy !
Date: 5/29/2015 4:29:00 PM
what a charming poem Carrie - lovely description - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7
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Date: 5/29/2015 4:18:00 PM
A lovely story Carrie...A great brother/sister moment
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