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Remembering Grace

I danced with Grace across marble floors Her whispers still linger "I am yours, take me" We waltzed on over to the nearest door A coat room that we sanctioned heavenly These memories survive, still haunting me

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2011 5:01:00 AM

Congratulations Mitch on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 4/16/2011 5:42:00 PM

Great to see you at the top once more Mitch. Congratulations on this worthy poem's honored third place. Agape, Moses

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 4/16/2011 3:43:00 AM

Many congrats Mitch for big win in Dr Ram's contest. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/16/2011 3:34:00 AM

Super Congrats Mitch on your 3rd place win.A picture of elegance and beauty is portrayed through these words.Loved it.Gautami

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2011 6:00:00 PM

I LOVE this,Mitch. A hauntingly beautiful write. Congratulations. (was there really a Grace?)

Elaine George

Date: 4/15/2011 5:56:00 PM

Ahhhh! Those memories are forever - lasting. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Mitch, Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2011 4:06:00 PM

Congrats Mitch on your super win in Dr. Ram's contest my friend..an awesome entry luv.. enjoy and happy weekend luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/15/2011 3:25:00 PM

Good one..Congratulations on your win..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/15/2011 2:40:00 PM

How wonderful a short story done so well in 5 lines HUZZAH! Congrad's Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/15/2011 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, Mitch

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2011 2:43:00 PM

Is this for that one ghost contest of Dr. Ram's. I love how you did it. I would like to go this route . I hope we dont have to mention God and a ghost inside the poem. HOpe this beauty does well!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/6/2011 8:56:00 AM

You sure got me blushing, Mitch-- I just read your comment on Andrea's poem--oh wow, I stole your heart?? I never even knew that! That was such a sweet thing to say, thank you :) do you want a piece of it back now? haha I am selfish, not giving you back the whole ;) let me savor it a bit more (uh-oh now I think I am sounding like a vampire or something, lol)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/6/2011 8:45:00 AM

An expressive memory penned so beautifully Mitch .. good luck if for any contest posted luv.. u painted a visual masterpiece in words ..hope u are doing well and are happy .. blessings with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/6/2011 8:39:00 AM

glad to hear you after a long time and that too with a graceful waltz, Mitch

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/6/2011 6:54:00 AM

It has been a pleasure to read your poetry today Mitch. I hope to get back soon to read more of your poetry. May you always find inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/6/2011 6:03:00 AM

Hi Mitch-- wow, how are you?? I had a smile on my face as soon as I saw your name in the new poems list, I was like, long time no hear from you! I was about to comment here then I see your inspiring comments in my poems-- I hope all is well with you! This is such a romantic write, yet bittersweet-- I could almost picture you waltzing with Grace, just beautiful :) enjoy your day ok and smiles back to you :)