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Remembering Brian

Heroes come in all ages and size They are of a common thread A heart of gold rules their essence Showing love beyond expectation For others, they will run the extra mile No matter the need or cause My hero's name was, Brian No superman or batman was he Just a big brother who championed life With much wisdom for a boy of fourteen Some claimed that Brian was an “old soul” With talents beyond his years From repairing broken wings and things To his genuine commitment to caring For siblings and friends alike He rescued many friends from trouble When adults could not be found Amazing bravery and humility Would shine through many times His math skills were quite impressive We marveled at the tree house he built Where we enjoyed his storytelling and jokes The perfect child, Brian never got a scolding One day I escaped an uncle’s wrath Carried to safety upon his shoulders Walking for miles to a neighbor’s home I admit, at six I was not always sweet After he had made sure I would be fine He returned home to await our parents Assuming they'd be home by then Sadly mistaken, Brian took the punishment for me That unforgetable year, God called Brian home ~*~
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/27/2011 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Crystal's contest "My Hero" Annalise. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/18/2011 3:17:00 PM
Dear Annalise. This is so beautiful. Congratulations on your winning placement. This wonderful tribute to your brother is heartbreaking and so very lovely. Best wishes, Deb
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Date: 1/18/2011 2:51:00 PM
I'm so happy to see your poem rank high in Crystal's contest, Annalise. Bravo, my friend! This is so moving. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/18/2011 1:58:00 PM
I can feel your sorrow Annalise, I went through the same paths of life. Many congratulations on your win in Crystal's excellent contest....:)
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Date: 1/18/2011 11:57:00 AM
Congrats Annalise on your super big win in the My Hero contest with this astounding write and entry my friend.. superb piece of poetry .. enjoy your sweet success with luv..
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Date: 1/12/2011 5:49:00 PM
You have described your late brother Brian extremely well in this emotion-stirring presentation
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Date: 1/12/2011 10:28:00 AM
This is a stunning tribute Audrey.. So much emotion and great memories attached to it as well.. Love Wilma
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Date: 1/12/2011 10:12:00 AM
Wow! Fantastic write,friend.Perfect piece of literature
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Date: 1/11/2011 7:09:00 PM
Smile ~ "Amazing;" reading the coms below ~ Smile ~ like precisionistics clock-work....I love "Your Beauties" name my dear ~ "Annalise" ~ It is Almost fairytalistic; "WoW"...."Beautiful Compassionate Painting" ~ "My 'Love' & Warmth, Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening Dear, Amid The Rainbow Skies Where, 'Dreams Never Die;' Somewhere, 'Over The Milky Way of, 'Beautiful Love;' Sweet Dreams, 'My Dear Annalise;'" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 1/11/2011 5:46:00 PM
I cried, I am saddened by this story. Sorry sis for your pain. Love you much. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 1/11/2011 12:22:00 PM
Nice caricature of Brian with a nice tribute, Annalise
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Date: 1/11/2011 11:25:00 AM
Annalise, I sent you a Soup mail after reading yours. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/11/2011 10:47:00 AM
Oh, I'm so sorry you had to lose your treasured brother Brian at such a young age, Annalise. This poem also meets the definition of a "lyric" or "narrative" poem, so if you list it to one of those categories, you can still enter it in Crystal's contest. Hope you'll do it. It's outstanding! Love, Carolyn
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