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Remember When

Remember when I use to could do anything. Remember the times when life wasn't weak. Remember when I use to didn't care. Remember how strong I was. Remember how I've grew weaker every day. Remember how well you and dad use to let me do anything. Remember how hard I've struggled on my life. Remember the crap we have put on each other. Remember the times that dad didn't care. Remember when I say I am ok I'm really not but instead I'm weak and fighting a battle to keep myself up. Remember when I changed the summer before high school for me and granny. Remember how bad it is on me when you two turn things down on me. Remember that I'm weak and trying a lot. Remember when dad called me baby girl. Remember these things mean a lot.

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Date: 2/21/2015 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured on soups home page. Jan
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Date: 2/19/2015 6:49:00 PM
Lola:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 2/5/2015 9:23:00 AM
Hi, Lola. You appeared on Poetry Soup almost a year ago. One hundred and seventy-four people have read the poem you posted on that day. We would like to see more of your work. It's an easy way to get your work out there for other poets to read, and to read their work as well.
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