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I was the one who was sat on the wall I was so little the others were tall The school was next door so I didn’t go far Never needed to go to school by car I played in the playground with some of my fiends Long summer days that never seemed to end That’s a long time ago, can you recall? The bumps and bruises when taking a fall Long summer nights turned to autumn browns As I grew older I had life’s up’s and down’s Working for a living to make ends meet Bringing up children that was a treat Do you remember me? I was young and daft I couldn’t remember when I last laughed I had wild ideas but they didn’t last long I knew back then that I didn’t belong Now I am older, I’ve survived life’s trials I’ve cried many tears and travelled miles Nearing retirement I look back at things Wondering now what retirement brings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/27/2010 12:18:00 PM
Hope you are well. Have missed seeing your works. It is hard to keep up with everyone on the soup. Stop by and read some of my sillisms.
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Date: 6/4/2010 2:15:00 AM
I do hope that you will enjoy retirement and keep up with your creative write, Pamela! Thank you for commenting "The Sea" and have a great weekend...Gert
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Date: 5/13/2010 9:24:00 PM
nice write, enjoyed
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Date: 5/13/2010 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Sara x
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Date: 5/13/2010 2:37:00 PM
Great memoir of some of your life...Retirement opens doors to new possibilities....Have a great relaxed life..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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