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Below is the poem entitled Release which was written by poet Richard Bates. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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my hand grips the bar
pressure builds, my muscles cringe 
Now I must let go

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  1. Date: 6/7/2011 8:03:00 AM
    Nice haiku with nice images, on release, Richard