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Below is the poem entitled RELAXING BEACH which was written by poet Laurel Larison. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The beach of summer so hot and wonderful
Splashing in the ocean waves
The finding of shells and feet walking along the sand
Fulfilling our desire for more
Relaxing sun and sea breeze through our hair
Wonderful days of mornings, afternoon breezes
Makes us forget our troubles even if its only a little while
Sun, sand, breeze, cool relaxing ocean waves
Makes a wonderful postcard for sure

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  1. Date: 7/2/2012 10:07:00 PM
    Despite the little bit of amphiboly in the third line (Are you finding feet? Are shells walking along the sand?), this is a decently descriptive submission describing something I personally enjoy. I live not too far from the New Jersey Shore.

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 12:47:00 PM
    sounds like you are in Jamaica,good for tourist,need someone to take the pictures for the postcard ,great write Laurel

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    Date: 6/27/2012 1:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks so much. I have entered that in a contest too!
  1. Date: 6/27/2012 11:41:00 AM
    Send me a postcard Laurel. - My holiday next week .....hope for a lot sunshine and some splashing in the ocean waves!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise