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Relationships

Harbouring relationships upon the ocean floor. Beneath the frothing, rolling waves that pound my broken core. Polluted waters sifting pain, tear the hulls apart. Coursing wildly through my veins, leaves just a broken heart.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2013 12:23:00 AM

Hi Mitchell, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/29/2013 2:41:00 PM

Very beautiful! Congrats on your win. AO

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/28/2013 8:58:00 PM

Mitchell. Congratulations, with your awesome poem. Goodnight~LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/10/2013 11:28:00 AM

Mitchell, you enter proficient - thanks for sharing your poem with us at P-Soup. - Wish you a warm welcome and wish you luck. - Nice to read your poem, looking forward to reading more from you in the future. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David De La Croes

Date: 5/10/2013 7:34:00 AM

I like the way you use the power of the ocean to demonstrate the tumultuous nature of relationships. Welcome, Mitchell... David

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/10/2013 7:31:00 AM

What a great comparative analogy of Oceans and relationships/emotions Well written.

Skat A

Date: 5/9/2013 9:53:00 PM

Hi Mitchell, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/9/2013 12:28:00 PM

This is so concise and brilliantly expresssed. I have an affiliation with the ocean myself. Well done.