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Below is the poem entitled Regret which was written by poet Cecilia Macfarlane. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Salty tear drops fell as her heart broke.
Hopes and dreams evaporated like smoke.
She wanted forevermore!
Not another closed door?
Drowned by memories, that threatened to choke.

Trapped into the detritus of her own mind.
Another love contract left unsigned.
Frozen into inaction!
An incomplete fraction.
Accept destiny that has been assigned?

A shattered heart maybe beyond repair.
Unlucky in love, a fate most unfair!
Does she dare keep trying?
Her crushed heart is dying.
Reluctant to love, her final declare.

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  1. Date: 9/14/2013 3:52:00 PM
    I see you took the serious route in this contest my friend and it is VERY effective! A shattered heart can be repaired but then there are those nasty scars, but the scars give us insight and wisdom which you have displayed here...You are growing by leaps and bounds as a poet, Cecilia and I am SO happy to see you entering and winning contests! - Tim

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 4:10:00 PM
    Good lines on regret!! Congrats for your win, Cecilia.

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 10:29:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win Cecillia

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 8:39:00 PM
    Cecilai,, congratulations on your win ~SKAT~ :-)

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 6:36:00 PM
    Hi Lovely Cecilia, love all 3 limericks.. I love the first one, mostly... congrats...Linda

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 4:56:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 4:32:00 PM
    Cecilia, Congrats on your win with this trio of limericks! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 3:30:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your great winner...Congrats on placement in the winners' list..Sara

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 3:21:00 PM
    It appears I am right, you made the winners list. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 8:05:00 AM
    Good morning Cecelia, I feel some of the questions relate to my daughter, who's in a state of declaring all sorts of emotions to love. wishing you luck in the contest. I enjoyed all 3 limericks. Hope you enjoy my newest poem called "Of Ink." a dedication to all poetry soup poets... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 4:14:00 PM
    Love the line frozen into inaction...nice poem..good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 3:35:00 PM
    YOu chose a good topic, regret about love always enters people's minds!! Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 1:16:00 PM
    Reluctant to love.....oh Cecelia....maybe for now....but always leave the door of your heart slight ajar.....Love will come in unawares.....

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 11:35:00 AM
    Well done, should do well in the contest Cecilia.

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 11:01:00 AM
    - It is said that we should kiss a lot of frogs before we find "prince" - Patience .... luck will come! - A very good poem Cecilia! - Luck in love and Luck in contest ! - Have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 8:57:00 AM
    Been there. I understand how these feelings go. This was very hard hitting for me. Wonderful job!