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A tear in a cloud
Deluge of raindrops descend 
The thirsty earth drinks.

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  1. Date: 7/2/2010 5:15:00 PM
    Now, this is just so real. I even love the imagery of the rain floating and sinking into the thirsty ground. Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 7/2/2010 11:10:00 AM
    ahh,, refreshing he he,, nice write on natue?, lol enjoyed your haiku..P.D.