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Searching for answers as I gaze into the crystal ball, can it predict what my future will hold? I see the magical mists of time swirling, gradually they clear and finally reveal the man in my dreams staring back at me … as I gaze into the crystal ball I see YOUR face The best of 6 Contest Sponsor Nette Onclaud Visual 3 chosen 06~06~16

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Date: 6/6/2016 11:39:00 PM
Big congrats for your win. Did you see mine had a waterfall inside the ball? I found that on the internet and it gave me the idea for what I wrote.
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Date: 6/7/2016 1:47:00 AM
I saw the poem didn't take note of the pic lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/6/2016 8:16:00 PM
Congratulations Jan...sweetly written
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Date: 6/7/2016 1:46:00 AM
Thanks David:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/6/2016 5:28:00 PM
Nicely done, Jan. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/7/2016 1:46:00 AM
Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/6/2016 5:06:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Jan :)
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Date: 6/6/2016 5:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/6/2016 4:45:00 PM
you got me here with your light and enchanting poem, jan... sweet congrats on your award in my contest with huggs!
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:51:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/6/2016 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement, lovely write.....
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:50:00 PM
Thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/6/2016 4:24:00 PM
Jan, very lovely and perfectly penned...congrats on your placement in the contest lady! :)-luloo
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:29:00 PM
Thanks LuLoo - I predicted to Matthew I would get 4th and I was right - I don't need a crystal ball do I lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/6/2016 4:02:00 PM
Wonderful. I'm sure the face belongs to your husband Jan. Good luck.
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:28:00 PM
Thanks jean I got a 4th place am delighted .. but if you look below I predicted it to Matthew hours before it was judged - how spooky is that lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/6/2016 3:35:00 PM
YOurs is really cool, Jan. I am feeling so sad that Soup's system made this contest impossible for me to enter. You are lucky you were able to get yours in! It should do well.
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Date: 6/6/2016 3:44:00 PM
I had trouble entering the contest Andrea - it wasn't until today that I could post the image too - hope they get the glitch sorted out:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/6/2016 1:57:00 PM
So you are in the contest. Look into the crystal ball and wee who wins it. I went back to work today at BMCC. Also managed to post a poem - which I hope you will take a look at! Hope your dreams come true! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:27:00 PM
Just found out the contest has been judged AND I got 4th as I predicted - I don't need a crystal ball do I lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/6/2016 3:44:00 PM
I predict 4th place or less lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/6/2016 3:43:00 PM
I read your poem Matthew - great work:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/6/2016 7:15:00 AM
What an amazing vision you saw dear, Jan! Wonderfully done! Good luck!
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Date: 6/6/2016 7:20:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/6/2016 3:26:00 AM
Great write, Jan:) The crystal ball point of view is really wonderful:)
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:57:00 AM
I have seen several on this theme - I also thought of it as a single tear drop too:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/5/2016 8:10:00 PM
Nice write... love the third line!
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Date: 6/5/2016 8:14:00 PM
Thanks Chris I appreciate your lovely comment:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/5/2016 7:41:00 PM
Loveliness of imagination... tranquil emotions...enjoyed Reading ....
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Date: 6/5/2016 7:50:00 PM
Thanks Probir - for some reason it wouldn't let me post the image will have to try again now:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/5/2016 7:30:00 PM
Lovely Jan...don't show hubby or he might ask for breakfast in bed : )
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Date: 6/5/2016 7:34:00 PM
LOL no chance he's got to be up at silly o'clock for the races tomorrow:-) hugs jan xx

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