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Reflections of Love Contest

I was all of six years old He was a big boy of 12 I adored him Showed me how to use a fishing rod He was my little tin god I worshipped him In my teenager years he spoke of love Wasn’t me he was talking about I loved him As we got older the age difference grew less Looked at me with interest, not just a pest Can see me at last Asks me out on a date, first of many Had a fantastic time, love grows a plenty Togetherness wow On our wedding day, both nervous but pleased From the age of just 6 was all I had dreamed In love .with love. The wardrobe mirror reflects every move and more From tumbled love making , to sleep and snore Still love him Parents now, one of each Teaching them to wait for what’s out of reach We adore them 27/02.2013 Contest : reflections of love

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Date: 2/28/2013 1:51:00 PM
So sweet! Great life
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/1/2013 11:47:00 AM
Thanks Susan for stopping by ....Seren
Date: 2/28/2013 1:15:00 AM
Seren you little romantic....David soup mail...
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/28/2013 1:57:00 AM
Awww David its all in the mind - damn - ....Seren
Date: 2/27/2013 9:24:00 PM
What a beautiful love story. Well written I enjoyed it from start to end.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/27/2013 11:51:00 PM
Hi Abigale. Glad you enjoyed...Seren
Date: 2/27/2013 8:47:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Seren! This, your grand children will be reading one day and it's melt their hearts. A definite winner in my book! Love, Annalise
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/27/2013 9:17:00 PM
Thank you Annalise ....Seren
Date: 2/27/2013 8:40:00 PM
This is a delightful and wonderful write my friend! I really loved reading this tremendous poem this evening! What an enlightening piece, quite the gorgeous poem, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/27/2013 9:19:00 PM
Thanks Russell ....Seren
Date: 2/27/2013 8:08:00 PM
Beautiful Seren...good luck...
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/27/2013 8:14:00 PM
Thanks Donna couldnt work out the name of the form, any suggestions?

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