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dusk at autumn lake in the brightness of our eyes two swans touch their beaks

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  1. Date: 5/30/2012 12:26:00 PM
    I have not been on the soup for almost a week to read and comment. I have enjoyed being able to read your poetry today. I wanted to stop by to thank you for the comments you made during my absence from the soup. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/11/2010 11:03:00 PM
    Hey Ruben! I'm doing fine, thnx. Just wanted to say "thnx" for reading and leaving comments on my piece. I appreciate this. ...Later, Jimmy

  1. Date: 10/11/2010 9:28:00 PM
    truly a picturesque view penned within proving the talent along with showing the inspirational view in well chosen words,,,and i want to Thank you for all your visits to my words and leving your words behind,,Blessings..cecil

  1. Date: 10/10/2010 10:38:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, Ruben with this beautiful swan haiku. Hugs, Emilia

  1. Date: 10/10/2010 6:32:00 AM
    Oh such beauty ... sarah xx

  1. Date: 10/9/2010 10:50:00 PM
    beautiful haiku Ruben, congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 10/9/2010 7:20:00 AM
    Congratulations Ruben on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest with this wonderful scene >> James

  1. Date: 10/9/2010 12:02:00 AM
    tops in imagery, one can feel the moment, wonderful Ruben, congrats on this winner. Harry

  1. Date: 10/8/2010 11:26:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS, on a poem well done,,, have a nice one,.p.d.

  1. Date: 10/8/2010 2:33:00 PM
    C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S(Here's a star for the best poet and artist)Celene :)

  1. Date: 10/8/2010 1:16:00 PM
    Congrats Ruben my friend on your number one first place win.. so happy to be sharing the spot with u luv.. in Andrea's contest.. enjoyed this masterpiece as always your poetry is unique and captivating..enjoy your win...

  1. Date: 10/8/2010 1:06:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Ruben! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/8/2010 12:31:00 PM
    thank you so much Ruben ^_^ smiles all over especially as I log out here now-- I definitely will enjoy the honor (you've long been a fave of mine ^_~)! ^_^ thank you :) -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 10/8/2010 11:12:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win on this one..Love seeing those swans make the heart shape with their beaks...Sara

  1. Date: 10/8/2010 11:00:00 AM
    Ruben great imagery for your haiku! Love it and congrats on your first place in Andrea's contest ;)

  1. Date: 10/8/2010 10:52:00 AM
    Really enjoyed this one, Ruben! Loved the contrast of dusk & brightness-- such a romantic haiku-- swans are so beautiful! :) Super congrats on your awesome win ^_^ -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 10/8/2010 10:10:00 AM
    Ruben, congratulations on your 1st place win! You were able to paint a superb image with your words, and have it be 'romantic' while still pulling off a true haiku! This speaks volumes to me~Chris

  1. Date: 10/8/2010 9:21:00 AM
    Congratulations Ruben on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/8/2010 8:22:00 AM
    Ahhh....such tranquility.......this paints such a beautiful picture!! Hooray for your win, are an artist with your pen, my friend!! :)

  1. Date: 10/8/2010 7:39:00 AM
    Con gratulations, Ruben on your first place. Agape, Moses