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Reflections

It seems these portals I stroll past, mark passing glances in some calculated reveal. All at once, morphing to a silvered window, reflecting between two worlds. A glance, becomes a stare, becomes a shift in perception. hallway mirror transcended by passing years… my father’s face

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Date: 12/24/2015 10:50:00 AM
Scary revelation(that is we are aging)..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/20/2015 7:21:00 PM
David, Congrats on your Haibun Free-Style win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/20/2015 11:57:00 AM
This is a great idea, and you have placed because I look upon your finishing poem as a senru, as I had asked for anything other than haiku's to end the Haibuns. It is a close call though. Great work, and thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 12/20/2015 11:10:00 AM
DAVID, Congratulations on your Haibun Free-Styled win. WUV **SKAT**
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Date: 11/15/2015 2:59:00 AM
You are your father's son. Nice Haibun, David.
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