Reflecting On a Puddle

reflect my dreams as you mirror your world cool, still and dark yet changing with God's breath 12/08/15

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2015 9:09:00 AM

Hey, let me know if I have missed any poem at all of yours. I am just clicking in circles and can't find one! Hope your Christmas vacy is awesome (or are you back to work now?)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/10/2015 11:44:00 AM

I was astonished not to see this beauty on the winners' list, James! It's clever and beautiful. Keeping to the subject of mirrors and reflections, you also gave us a reflected image of a Tetractys! Well done! // paul

James Inman
Date: 12/10/2015 1:11:00 PM

Thank you for the wonderful words, Paul. Whatever the reason for not placing, I respect Nette and her decision, as well as everyone else who hosts a contest, (I may have missed something in the contest rules, including not doing a reverse) and I love her poetry.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2015 2:46:00 PM

amazing, Ralph, you poet you!!

James Inman
Date: 12/9/2015 9:01:00 PM

You made me smile Andrea.

James Fraser

Date: 12/8/2015 12:03:00 PM

Blessed write on the humble puddle, nice one James ~ good luck in the contest ~~ James ~~

James Inman
Date: 12/9/2015 9:00:00 PM

Thanks for the nice comment, James.