Reeds

Wind, sly wind Brush over the shore Sweep the leaves Stones, water Whistle over the lilies And rattle the reeds

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 10:36:00 AM

JEREMY, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 6:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Jeremy. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2012 2:23:00 PM

The expressiveness of this one took me there to enjoy the scene..((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/29/2012 6:37:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/27/2012 8:17:00 PM

I enjoyed your picturesque write, Jeremy! Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Kim

Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/27/2012 9:32:00 PM

Thank you very much for ackowledging me with placement! I enjoyed writing that for your contest very much. Be well, Jeremy