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red sun

reddish orange high light
passion, vivid yellow  beam
mind stuck in the dreamy cloud
rhythm of the sun

contest red sun

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  1. Date: 12/24/2013 3:57:00 AM
    DX..... --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 1:54:00 AM

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 1:57:00 AM
    "Nice work:)"

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 4:41:00 AM
    Hi Dom, Nice write as it reminds me of the sunsets here in Biloxi off towards New Orleans..Thanks for the visit to my work.. Ken

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 12:14:00 PM
    your poem is awesome... and thanks for the kick a$$ comment... luv~ Linda

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 9:57:00 AM
    Enjoyed your very descriptive work...A form that has no meter or rhyme is easier than some forms..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 8/10/2013 6:18:00 AM
    Free thoughts! Nice DX! jimbo

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 11:24:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning poem.

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 6:09:00 PM
    Hi. :D I really just wanted to stop by and say "YAY Worf!" :):)

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 5:16:00 PM
    glad to finally see this one, and congrats for your win. The last two lines I liked a lot.

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 2:18:00 PM
    Congratulation, a very colorful expressed poem. God bless you Erich

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:26:00 PM
    DX .... congrats *****SKAT

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 9:25:00 PM
    I like it...congratulations

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:47:00 PM
    Vivid descriptions passion and dreamy . Very well done. Congratulations on your win :)_

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 1:32:00 PM
    I really like this! :) Lovely descriptive words....Good luck..