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Red Sun

A blush colors the sky's cheeks;
Oh my! that flirtatious Sun!
Steamy whispers in the ear
a smile left behind.

Red Sun Contest

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  1. Date: 7/25/2013 4:35:00 PM
    Great poetic quality..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:24:00 PM
    Melani.... congrats *****SKAT

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:44:00 PM
    You have characterized the sun as a flirt... very well done. Congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 4:44:00 PM
    Very cute..congratulations

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 3:38:00 PM
    Wow, such a love affair with nature. Congrats on your win Melani.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 9:08:00 AM
    cleverly written and easy to read... Congratulations on your win.... Jake