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Red Sun

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Red Sun

 sunrise inflames the dawn sky,
 as if it is on fire 
 clouds curl a blush cream, gives
 an unearthly sight


For Russell Sivey's contest, "Red Sun"

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  1. Date: 7/24/2013 12:12:00 AM
    Hope it won. I just saw the contest was judged and I was not on the list. But I bet this beauty made it on!

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 7/25/2013 6:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Andrea , no I don't think it placed for a win, but thank you for thinking that it might have. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 6:12:00 AM
    Great visual! Connie! Thanks! Jimbo

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/29/2013 6:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Jimbo thank you for the kind comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 8:04:00 PM
    Have a look at the form. 7/7/7/5. Your content is good and with a bit of rearranging I am sure you could make it work. If you click on dodoitsu up above "about this poem" it offers an excellent example of the form. If I can be of help soup mail me. Thanks for you visit today and thoughtful comment.

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/29/2013 4:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Richard thank you for the heads up. I believe the syllable count is correct now. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:37:00 PM
    ps......... a very lovely view. love the sweet look out tan, in your imagery... excellent... LINDA

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/29/2013 6:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Lind for your kind comment. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:34:00 PM
    Hello Connie, first I want to thank you for helping support the new poets when I had a contest especially for them.. :-) :-)... that was very nice of you. Hardly any one helped greet the winners. That showed me that you have a very tender heart... thank you many hugs... LINDA

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/29/2013 6:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I remember what it's like to be a newbie, and wanted to shout out a 'hallo to them. Thanks for your lovely and kind heart. I hope you're having a lovely weekend. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:09:00 PM
    Very beautiful. Betty

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/29/2013 6:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Betty for your kind comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 5:36:00 PM
    A very descriptive picture Connie--the blush cream is perfect!

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/29/2013 6:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Craig thank you for your kind comment. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 5:06:00 PM
    very descriptive Connie, I would have loved to see this in 3D, it's a good entry for contest love xxx

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/29/2013 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mystic for your visit and lovely comment. It means a lot. I hope you're having a great weekend. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 4:13:00 PM
    this is lovely Connie ...I like it....best wishes

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/29/2013 6:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Joseph thank you for your kind comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 1:40:00 AM
    Nicely done, Connie. I expect to see it on the winners list.

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/28/2013 1:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Andrea thank you for your kind comment. I hope you're enjoying Summer. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/27/2013 7:45:00 PM
    Russell should like this one because i do.

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/28/2013 1:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Robert thank you kindly do the visit and comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie