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Red Sun

Looking up the horizon sun rises up the clear sky suddenly turned into red to warm the whole world. The sun like a flaming ball magically transformed me into a slave of nature to worship God’s work. June 25, 2013 For Russell's "Red Sun" Contest

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Date: 10/30/2014 2:43:00 PM
Exquisite piece! Well done! Pandita
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Date: 8/3/2013 7:33:00 PM
Belated big congratulations my dearest friend Maria for the super win and the other recent wins! Thanks for sharing this precious gem you've shared this morning. I love it and so enjoyed. I'm so sorry if I've missed this one. I was terribly busy this year with unexpeted onerous duties. Thanks also for your precious time stopping by & your very insipiring comments on my work. Happy & blessed wkend! love lots and biggest hugs with kisses! hugs, Leonora
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Date: 7/25/2013 2:30:00 PM
Maria.... congrats *****SKAT
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Date: 7/23/2013 9:35:00 PM
Very pretty....congratulations
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Date: 7/23/2013 5:58:00 PM
Really like the "slave of nature" . Very well imaged. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 7/2/2013 10:13:00 PM
In about five billion years, the sun will run out of hydrogen and burn itself out. None of us will be around when that happens. Good write.
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Date: 6/24/2013 6:49:00 PM
Great entry.... Good luck sweetheart... Jake
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