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Red Sun

Looking up the horizon
sun rises up the clear sky
suddenly turned into red
to warm the whole world.

The sun like a flaming ball
magically transformed me
into a slave of nature
to worship God’s work.

June 25, 2013
For Russell's "Red Sun" Contest

Copyright © Maria Paz Samelo

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  1. Date: 10/30/2014 2:43:00 PM
    Exquisite piece! Well done! Pandita

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 8:04:00 PM
    Maria this was lovely and very creative! Nice piece :)

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 7:33:00 PM
    Belated big congratulations my dearest friend Maria for the super win and the other recent wins! Thanks for sharing this precious gem you've shared this morning. I love it and so enjoyed. I'm so sorry if I've missed this one. I was terribly busy this year with unexpeted onerous duties. Thanks also for your precious time stopping by & your very insipiring comments on my work. Happy & blessed wkend! love lots and biggest hugs with kisses! hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:30:00 PM
    Maria.... congrats *****SKAT

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 9:35:00 PM
    Very pretty....congratulations

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:58:00 PM
    Really like the "slave of nature" . Very well imaged. Congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 10:13:00 PM
    In about five billion years, the sun will run out of hydrogen and burn itself out. None of us will be around when that happens. Good write.

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 10/30/2013 8:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ....dang Robert...
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:49:00 PM
    Great entry.... Good luck sweetheart... Jake