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Red Sun

Morning sun and sky aflame Message from the Sun God Ra I hold your fate in my warmth Live lives of respect.
6/18/13 Red Sun contest

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick

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  1. Date: 6/22/2013 9:25:00 PM
    A wonderful message where ever it's from... nicely done !!

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 3:55:00 PM
    What a nice pagan expression here! Peace & love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 9:55:00 PM
    this is simply beautiful. I think if I had been an Indian, I'd have been of the tribe called "sun worshipers!"

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 6:45:00 PM
    Thanks for stopping by Barb, the spider verse was just personification of the leaf & the similarity between mans voyage and that of natures. Good motto above maybe [live life's? ]Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 10:29:00 AM
    The flame within will tell it's tale. A foolish life is not for sale.

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 4:12:00 PM
    'Live lives of respect'...That just about covers it all, Barbara...If we all lived our lives that way this world would be a much better place...Good luck in the contest - Tim

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 3:42:00 PM
    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this contest entry this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always valued..Sara