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Red Parka

Looking great sitting there with her hood on It’s a red parka, like the start of dawn She holds her jacket as she looks around Softly she bows her head, looks to the ground Her skin is like ivory, soft and smooth Her tender smile comforts and it does soothe I want to hold her near, I meet her eyes Beauty holds fast as I start to realize Her life is for me, she holds me deeply Our stare allows our hearts to form singly I touch her hood and I move it on down Off of her head, and from her royal crown I feel her awesome life force within me I grab her softly and pull her closely We bring our lips together and we kiss I don’t sense the shy girl, I keep our bliss The red hooded woman now holds me tight She beams with a smile when she’s in the light I can’t help but to return the gesture Who knows what will happen in the future
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 5/26/2013 12:08:00 AM
    very nice, Russell. and very romantic! Was it by chance based on a picture or something? I know i should try that one contest about the pictures!!

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 2:41:00 PM
    wonderfully passionate write, my friend

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 7:08:00 AM
    Very passionate work..Enjoyed reading this morn..I sat in a red recliner yesterday while waiting to get my paper work on my washer and dryer..Recliners must not have the same aura..Sara

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 5:13:00 AM
    Lovely romantic piece full of promise!

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 12:33:00 AM
    ... these random strangers in life are more often than not the possible beginnings of true relationships. Take a chance... see where it goes. I enjoyed this interesting quatrain!

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 8:25:00 PM
    Wow! This is another superb write my dear friend, Russel! Sooo romantic and sweet! You never stop to amaze me with you outstanding write my dear friend! Thank you so much for sharing. If this is for the contest, I'm sure it'll do very well. By the way, many many congrats on your fabulous wins recently. I'm so glad and honored sharing with you a grand win recently. I'm still on my way to read that marvelous piece of yours. Again, thanks a lot for everything! Have a great day! love/ hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 7:29:00 PM
    Aahhh..mystery woman....very cool and an old time movie....great Russell...

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 5:16:00 PM
    Very romantic

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  1. Date: 5/23/2013 2:38:00 PM
    - A hope of a romantic destiny .... Who knows what it will bring? - Russell this is a very sweet and romantic poem. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)