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Red Moon

All eyes stare up in the night sky. An amazing red moon stares back. All these questions, but no real reply. Red moon, red moon, who are you? All thoughts of creation stop dead in their tracks. Cosmic awareness is beginning to show itself. It's hard to focus on the truth in the cracks. It's even harder to understand books on the shelf. All visions are becoming untangled. Life's awakened realization is in the blood moon. All sight will be strangled, The truth shall unleash itself soon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/10/2014 1:16:00 PM
I enjoyed your cryptic, mystical poem and reveled in trying to untangle the tendrils of your rhyme. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/7/2014 4:02:00 PM
nice take Felisha congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/7/2014 8:14:00 AM
Beautiful expressions on the red moon. Congrats on the win, felisha
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:20:00 PM
Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/2/2014 6:08:00 PM
This feels a bit ominous.
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