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Red Lights

With one last sip, she starts to slip her mind is gone, she's lost her grip. An image came she'll not forget of hellish anquish in a pit. She drifted back to childhood years when she would often play in tears - her brother's pranks that stranded her on creekbed rocks, became a blur. Still farther back in mem'ry past she saw herself as sinking fast into a tub of pouring rain afraid of swooshing down the drain. And now her mind's eye takes its turn she flags, unable to discern her left from right nor up from down; no color left, all things are brown. Her hearing's next to take a dip and then her heart begins to skip. Her drink was laced with LSD or opiates in poppy tea? No real harm done, she saw red lights, and learned a lesson, learned her rights. Was it just luck she did not flip? She never took another trip. iambic tetrameter written 4/15/2012

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Date: 5/4/2012 6:38:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/4/2012 5:47:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in the "And With a Sip"contest Reason. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2012 11:26:00 AM
A real trip of a read. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/30/2012 8:36:00 AM
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