Red Hair

Her hair a bright red In the autumn of her life Wind blew through strands shed Soon winter will come with white Coating auburn hair 'pon ground

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/19/2012 7:16:00 AM

Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Sara. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX

Gail Debole

Date: 10/18/2012 8:38:00 AM

Hi Sara - Very strong imagery and your use of alliteration gave me a mental pop today. Even though you refer to seasons, I keep thinking that you are describing mother nature. Many thanks for your comment about my poem. - Gail

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/14/2012 6:53:00 PM

Nice imagery. Loved the picture of autumn. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2012 1:08:00 AM

Yes, you paint a great picture of autumn turning into the winter here, Sara.

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 10/12/2012 3:24:00 PM

Good Evening Sara Red hair equals passion and fire and the leaves of autumn 'pon ground. Cheers

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/12/2012 10:31:00 AM

Winter can blow through our hairs, but we must not let it blow through our hearts. Beautiful poem!

Brandi Simpson

Date: 10/11/2012 9:17:00 PM

Love this poem, Sara. A beautiful visual.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/11/2012 5:36:00 PM

This is quite the wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed this fully delightful poem, one of magnificence and awe! This piece is spellbinding, Great Work!!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/11/2012 5:25:00 PM

Winter sure blew through my hair. Good tanka you have penned. Thanks for sharing.