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RECCE Blow me away. Take me within the storm Embrace me let me know that you are the stronger one. Let me know God is to fear This is his world. Wind is of a greater source. I hear the canopy over the hammock switching in and out. The tables turn upside down as the windows shattered loud. A windstorm came without rain and the peace became disturbed. Fearing the wrath of a greater source, we sought shelter. This is God’s world. Wind is omnipotent. As nature begins to calm itself, the wind capitulated. Bringing fresh air and a nice environment, we begin to investigate. Reconnaissance discovered all is well. The stability was felt. Our findings are that God cares. ____________________________________________| Scribe August 26, 2015!

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Date: 9/7/2015 12:07:00 AM
Excellent write. A late congratulation. I love this write.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 10/30/2015 6:43:00 AM
Thanks Micheal for you awesome response. Verlena
Date: 9/1/2015 1:17:00 AM
Congrats on your superb winning write Verlena!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 10/30/2015 6:44:00 AM
Thanks Upma for your super-awesome response. Verlena
Date: 8/30/2015 11:10:00 PM
Verlena, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my WIND contest. SKAT LOVE
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/31/2015 2:38:00 PM
Thanks Skat for this awesome support. Verlena
Date: 8/30/2015 8:32:00 AM
God will never leave us nor forsake us so long as we cling to Him and acknowledge who is.. =') love the presentation of this poem.. the strong lines then comes the so soft line at the end!!~Olive Eloisa =')
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/31/2015 2:38:00 PM
Awesome support Olive! Thanks... Verlena
Date: 8/28/2015 8:37:00 AM
I like the mood of this piece. God does indeed care.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/31/2015 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Richard for your awesome remarks... Verlena

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