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Rebuilding What Was Torn Down

Rebuilding what was torn down might take endless effort, and it can be definitely done without recalling the hurt. To visualize it again, it's putting together the ideas that started it in adolescence... will it be the same dream as then? Some achievers build it as a bricklayer does: brick by brick... until it is clearly conceived, to amaze themselves who strongly believed. Rebuilding what was torn down by malevolent forces takes firm belief, and with my defiant courage it will have life again: breathing as I breath with much sought relief. Copyright 2010 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 9/7/2010 3:07:00 PM
Andrew, it seems we are always striving to rebuild what was torn down. Indeed, it takes both courage and determination. Keen insight revealed in your poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/5/2010 6:01:00 PM
Very intelectual thoughts on rebuilding what was torn down though hurt, Andrew
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