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Rebirth of a Myth Creature

The fire was burning brightly shooting hot sparks into the air multi coloured were its flares vibrant yellows, vivid reds Blues, purples and violet hues within all the swirling smoke a faint vision appears to view squinting I stare into the flames Deep in the heart of the fire slowly, slowly unfurling its wings a beautiful bird appears into view gasping with awe and wonder I watch as from the fiery heart a Phoenix emerges into sight rising from the ashes of the fire reborn with all the hopes of life It flies up and hovers in the air so majestic and awe inspiring filling me with its magical beauty as it wings away into the distance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/6/2016 3:12:00 AM
Beautifully written Shadow... /|\
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Date: 6/15/2013 2:02:00 AM
nicely done Shadow ;}
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Date: 6/15/2013 4:22:00 PM
ty Debbie pleased you enjoyed it have a good w/e Shadow x
Date: 6/12/2013 11:07:00 AM
Wonderful rebirth of Phenix from ashes and fire.
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Date: 6/12/2013 11:42:00 AM
Mario hi and ty for reading I love mysterious things and legends Shadow x
Date: 6/12/2013 7:08:00 AM
Great job, I enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 6/12/2013 10:31:00 AM
Hi Richard very much appreciated ty Shadow x
Date: 6/12/2013 7:03:00 AM
Beautifully written, i love the imagination it gives.Thanx Gidds
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Date: 6/12/2013 10:33:00 AM
Gidds ty If you can picture it that's great Shadow x
Date: 6/12/2013 6:13:00 AM
nicely penned Shadow......best wishes.....thanks for stopping by.....
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Date: 6/12/2013 10:34:00 AM
ty Joseph happy you had time to stop in and that you enjoyed it Shadow x
Date: 6/11/2013 9:35:00 PM
the death denying phoenix. ehrmagerd.
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Date: 6/12/2013 3:45:00 AM
hi Nato ty for your time Shadow
Date: 6/11/2013 8:51:00 PM
Hello Shadow, wow...on the imagination. I love the rebirth and making of the poem. thank you for the magical feeling. . Thank you for sharing,.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 6/12/2013 3:44:00 AM
hi Linda imagination is a wonderful thing isn't it. ty for reading Shadow xox

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