Rebirth 2

You make my heart smile and feel happy for a while. You make my spirit sing and I feel like it's Spring. You make me want to dance. I'm in a lovely trance. You make me want to fly into the cool blue sky. I'd land upon your earth. This is my rebirth. By: Carole O'Terry Duet Copyright: Dec. 9, 2016 "All Rights Reserved"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2018 8:25:00 PM

this is sure a sweet little gem I found in your oldies!!!

Carole Duet
Date: 9/16/2018 1:29:00 AM

It's so simple but thank you so much, Andrea. Carole :D

Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/18/2016 7:41:00 PM

You must be in love....

Carole Duet
Date: 12/18/2016 10:34:00 PM

Maybe....:-)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/15/2016 12:20:00 AM

Excellent write. Lovely couplets. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Carole Duet
Date: 12/15/2016 1:40:00 PM

Thank you, Ravi.

White Wolf

Date: 12/12/2016 6:56:00 PM

I love this, Carole! Beautifully written!

Carole Duet
Date: 12/13/2016 2:07:00 AM

Thank you, Bud. Did you read "If I Were An Elephant" yet?

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/12/2016 12:25:00 PM

I have wondered much about your well being and whereabouts - it is so good to see your face. And I delight in the poem I found as well - it is light weight but packed with an incredible feeling that I have been blessed to know. Not only an incredible emotion, but an ultimate, perfect one! Aint it great when that happens? Poetry hugs, CayCay

Carole Duet
Date: 12/13/2016 2:11:00 AM

Yes it is CayCay! I just wish I could fly. Thanks for your nice comments. And hugs back.

Augustus Black

Date: 12/11/2016 2:59:00 AM

Wow! A very great couplet. Keep on going.

Carole Duet
Date: 12/11/2016 11:20:00 AM

Thanks again, Augustus. I'm glad you think so!! Carole

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/11/2016 1:04:00 AM

What a happy rebirth and what a cute couplet ...

Carole Duet
Date: 12/11/2016 11:19:00 AM

Thank you, Probir. So glad you liked it. Carole