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Reality's Bubbly

Paused on the veranda for a poetic tête-à-tête, we sipped vintage wine and spoke of days gone hither when we were much greener, recollect being impulsively dramatic mid rehearsals for what was to transpire, tripping the nimbly light and guzzling cheap beer into the wee hours of night's obscurity, wiser and older, yet still imagining one day we'll conquer the world, resigned to this present moment we comfortably reminisce, betwixt the fermented sputtering fizzle of reality

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Date: 11/14/2016 7:05:00 PM
Yeah, we use to pop the top too, Paloma. You captured the essence of my youth w/vibrancy and enlightenment. Kudos for a job expertly done. When in need of a poetic pro, just call you, eh. Love this poem though. Love and blessings to you.
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Date: 11/4/2016 11:22:00 PM
oh now, this is exquisitely fun!
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Date: 10/8/2016 7:20:00 PM
This piece tickles the tongue, some great word choices.
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Paloma P
Date: 10/8/2016 7:27:00 PM
Thanks, happy to tickle your tongue any day.
Date: 10/8/2016 10:52:00 AM
As a wise man once said, "Youth is wasted on the young.":) Excellent writing!
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Paloma P
Date: 10/8/2016 11:10:00 AM
Was that you? ;) I'm just beginning to realize that sad fact of life. Merci!

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