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you just can't sit down and write this stuff you have to look deep inside of us some poets are weak while others are strong sometimes emotions just seem to hold on when we give the best that we can and a tear that lived on a cheek for a span name the price no one can not for all the money in the world will we let this feeling go unheard. so we gather our sences our heart and our pride and we let the world know what we feel inside. yes with poetry and words that rhyme how else can we steal their time we must look pretty for the wanting minds and sound magnificant without a doubt to a world without eyes where ears will melt words carefully chosen and feelings are felt we turn cowards into heros and make lovers of the unloved we solve the mysteries of the mind and carry messages form heaven above words on paper, much much more an inspiration and a way to adore

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Date: 3/20/2014 1:34:00 PM
Love the message this conveys! Congrats on the win!
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Date: 3/10/2014 5:08:00 AM
Very inspirational write. Congrats on the fine win, john
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Date: 3/9/2014 2:48:00 PM
The truth of our emotions sometimes are hard to write. To get beyond the welled up pain is too much of a blight. That being said, I have to wonder how someone really does it. Reaching inside, spilling their guts like it don't hurt a bit. Please don't take my comments too literally. I like to rhyme. :) Great write john. Congrats on the placement. Peace. :)
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Date: 3/9/2014 2:33:00 PM
Beautifully said Joe... I enjoyed what you wrote... Verlena
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Date: 7/20/2012 11:02:00 AM
awesome description of how and why we write as poets, john. I agree with you, a woman who would make a man wait in the hot sun like that is terrible. I just made up the story because I imagine some girls would do such a thing. However, if the girl was not able to see the guy for a long time , maybe she was not even home yet, I think it would be utterly romantic if he waited like that for her!!
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Date: 7/8/2012 6:43:00 PM
John, hello.... a poem one should endure... I'm I in your prayers... wondering...pd
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Date: 7/9/2012 7:11:00 PM
when i think about you, you are.
Date: 6/3/2012 10:32:00 PM
people can talk all they want and still have left no impact. words just spill out of their mouth's with no point to them; just empty conversation. the beauty of real poetry is that, like you said, " . . . feelings are felt . . ." and this sensation it may evoke change. VERY good job! Continue writing <3
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Date: 4/23/2012 8:28:00 PM
sometimes this is O so true ;} good write John. have a great day .
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Date: 4/6/2012 12:34:00 PM
An absolute delight to read John, this is indeed a GEM. Happy Easter, have a most wonderful weekend :)
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Date: 3/29/2012 8:38:00 PM
you're a captivating man, John. there's a... between the romantic yet cynic that playfully adorn your moods, makes curiosity flair :)
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Date: 3/28/2012 7:19:00 PM
I really like your words here John...They read like they came from deep inside.Very nice!
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Date: 3/28/2012 5:06:00 PM
You summed it up wonderfully! I couldn't have penned it better! Thanks for your comments on one of my poems a while ago. Sorry for the slow response. God bless U!...Milt
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Date: 3/25/2012 5:15:00 PM
Very well said my friend. I do like a poem that has a message, not just a bunch of pretty words that mean nothing. They must tell a story or have a message to impart. Not really big on explicit sex. That is not a romantic poem it's just talking dirty and calling it "art". If you want a romantic poem make it pretty and talk about feelings and emotion. It's a heap more fun to think about it than to have it shoved in your face. (smile) A fine write here John. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/25/2012 12:53:00 AM
Nice one John xx
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