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Reading the Obituaries

Obituaries lay it out – The dates of death and birth, But we don’t have a clue about That person’s life on earth. What made him laugh, what caused her grief, What talents they possessed; What sport or song or book or film That he or she liked best. What memories were cherished Or what got their juices flowing; The dreams they had or motivating Force that kept them going. Each day I read of those who died – A parent, husband, wife And wonder how a few short lines Can sum up someone’s life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/12/2014 10:16:00 AM
A little town or a big city, our last summation can be a pity. But in the hearts of those who live. Is the reason God will still forgive. Peace. :)
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Date: 10/9/2014 10:46:00 PM
Ilene, I have thought this same thing when reading the Obits. They really should do a big write up, at least half a page. I think people who knew this person, and even strangers, might enjoy hearing all about them. Good one to write about.
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Date: 10/9/2014 7:31:00 PM
I like the way you break up your sentences. motivating Force that kept them going. - is a good one. I should try that method myself. Very kool!
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Date: 10/9/2014 7:12:00 PM
very true Ilene - the very weird thing is i was just looking at obituary notices - how uncanny:-( Hugs jan xxx
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