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Reading Clouds

Written by Lee Ramage clouds, fluffy, fill the sky, images shape, imagination grows the poetry, life experiences helps mould the shape. reader absorbs, draws picture, feelings born. For Michael Falotico’s contest “Where Your Poetry Comes from

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Date: 8/28/2011 12:56:00 AM
oooo! i love this... and drawing with the eyes, sounds like time well spent.. enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 8/12/2011 12:16:00 AM
oh, here is one I had missed. Yes, first we imagine something and then use our experiences to mold it! I love how you titled it Reading Clouds!
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Date: 8/5/2011 1:27:00 PM
I think we all see pictures in the clouds if we take the time to look. I remember as a child, looking into the early evening sky and seeing dragons, crocodiles and all manner of things. Interesting write. Regards, Robert.
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Date: 7/31/2011 9:06:00 PM
Lee, the poem I mentioned to your earlier during our telephone conversations is: Windowpanes by: Jim Fish. a Masterpiece indeed. It is posted here on the soup - just type Windowpanes in the search bar at the top of the home page. Elaine
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Date: 7/30/2011 10:34:00 PM
An excellent imagination absorbs its environment to create and paint unique and original pictures. A passing cloud an excellent source or metaphor for the imagination. A wonderful poem you have written here, and thank you for your kind comments on my poetry.
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Date: 7/29/2011 8:53:00 PM
Top Notch, Lee. Number one in my book. Elaine
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/29/2011 9:56:00 PM
Thanks Elaine. Appreciate your feedback. Lee
Date: 7/29/2011 7:07:00 PM
Lee, I have been inspired by the pictures clouds create as well. Wrote a poem on it long ago. This is very creative and also very true! Best wishes in Michael's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/29/2011 9:57:00 PM
thank you for your kind comments. I am really enjoying Poetry soup. Lee
Date: 7/29/2011 2:11:00 PM
I love the thought of the words as fluffy clouds - beautiful, Lee
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/29/2011 3:30:00 PM
Thanks Jack. I loved your first place win about balloons. Lee
Date: 7/29/2011 11:21:00 AM
lovely entry, best of luck in the contest Lee
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/29/2011 1:40:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words Francine. Lee
Date: 7/29/2011 10:29:00 AM
Wishing you the best Lee in Michael's contest. Love, Carol
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/29/2011 1:41:00 PM
Always nice to see you comment on my work. Thanks so much Carol. Lee
Date: 7/29/2011 10:05:00 AM
Nice imagery Lee and very well written!
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/29/2011 1:41:00 PM
Thanks Steven, appreciate your positive feedback. Lee

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