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Rays of Ligth Shine On Your Pit of Darkness

When your sadness comes around And your world is crashing down Way faster than you can stop it And your in a deep dark pit That' is carrying you way under And your brains starting to wonder If a hand is gonna pull You back up from all this bull And out of the darkness that Is making your heart go flat Not beating with the full force It is getting way off course As your life is a big mess You want to shout and confess How much you need someone who Is just as tortured as you Joining together into one Darkness broken by the sun Now shining down with the rays Of loves warmth to lead the way Out of this pit your both in Down a path to help you win A lifetime of joy and peace Slowly sorrow will decrease Day by day smiles return Lessons are now being learned No matter how bad things seem There's always a little gleam Of hope somewhere that you'll find When you need a little shine Of faith to help lead you down A hidden path to be found When the turmoil is too much To face alone and need the touch Of another darkened soul Who's been tortured by life's toll

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Date: 4/4/2014 7:56:00 PM
Your style is emotional and it makes an individual think about feelings and this is really a gift my friend, i enjoyed this one and the one i read the other day so much these two have really made me think alot. cheri thank you for your comment on the gentlemen i did have a real person in mind but he recently passed away i do miss him alot.
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Date: 4/2/2014 8:17:00 AM
Misery loves company so they say..What would happen if two totally dysfuntional people got together to live with each other for life?..Enjoyed reading your thought provoking work..Thanks for the visit to my work about the Hummingbird visiting the Butterfly Bush..Sara
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Date: 4/2/2014 7:45:00 AM
So true. No one understands quite like someone who has felt the same way. This is really good. x
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Date: 4/2/2014 1:48:00 AM
Hi, there, my friend. How do you come up with so many poems day after day like this? you are a writing machine!!! and I so enjoy having you as a friend at soup.
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Date: 4/1/2014 11:21:00 PM
Nice poem with beautiful rhythm and great message. Enjoyed it with high spirits.
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