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Cool, groovy, hip No bummers here Just a psychedelic love explosion A total gas We had a blast The chicks were far out So many foxes The babes were alright The whole scene was out of sight! A good trip all told This poem is circa the 1960's

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Date: 6/23/2015 7:52:00 AM
Second last line you have an "a" that seems out of place. Otherwise I quite enjoyed this 60s moment.
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Date: 6/23/2015 12:31:00 AM
This is so intriguing you penned it beautifully.............A.M.
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Date: 6/22/2015 5:43:00 PM
Groovy baby, I dig it :-)
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Date: 6/22/2015 5:14:00 PM
You have managed to capture the spirit of the sixties well... cool. Emile.
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