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Ravaged

The terror in their fear stained eyes The gleam of blood in every sight The remnants of the ghosts of joy That ceased to exist when the clock struck nine Everything blown up, in proportion The whole world flashes past eyes And leaves behind in its wake A trail of dust fine but sure The very hope that lines the heart In the blink of an eye turns to dust.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/19/2009 12:26:00 AM
you are a very strong writer. impressive work
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Date: 9/21/2008 6:43:00 AM
Nakhita - Very beautiful and very tragic - Well written and profound - God Bless
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