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Rapture

Autumn creeps in slowly Tenderly, seductively Summer giggles and blushes Tickled by crisp exhilarating breezes The colors of fall mesmerize her She needs to feel the fiery reds and golden hues. She longs to don their passionate splendor Autumn’s tender kisses entice her Swept away with reckless abandon The excitement overtakes her Enraptured in effervescent glory Autumn sinks in His force penetrating Deep into the heart of Summer His grip is unshakable Summer struggles to hold on The waning sun warms weakly Flowers bloom in last ditch effort She feels herself slipping away The vibrant luring colors fade Withering into brown lifeless forms The once lush green leaves of Summer Flutter helplessly down to the cold hard ground Autumn, triumphant, drags his defeated prey Onto the alter of Winter. Giving himself over as well The henchman lies down his life Winter’s deep frozen death reigns. A great, barren arctic tomb (womb?) Under which Summer waits to be reborn With Spring’s first gentle kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/23/2009 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Sara. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:42:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:07:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Sara! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:32:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 10/23/2009 9:58:00 AM
Dear Sara, Thank you for sharing this lovely feature of the week. Lainie
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Date: 10/21/2009 11:19:00 AM
Well deserved poem to be featured this week.. Congrats....Rhonda Hero
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 10/18/2009 5:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/26/2009 5:55:00 AM
Interesting comparisons and metaphoric language. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/26/2009 5:24:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful images in this lovely poem Sara, a joy to read>>James
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