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eternity a mosaic assembled from shimmering, glimmering tiles of delight and black-glazed stones of despair interlocking snowflakes in seamless beauty

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Date: 8/17/2015 11:38:00 AM
It's interesting to see what your visual eternity is to you, Mary. I especially liked how you closed the poem with your beautiful snowflakes. Yours in poetry, ~~Darlene
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Mary Rotman
Date: 8/24/2015 9:14:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene

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