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Love has come unbidden, the promise between us a delicate flower, and we are lost in a sea of desire, as your kisses fall upon my lips, oh so sweet will be our tomorrows. ______________________ August 8, 2015 Verse

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Eric Boddie

Date: 8/14/2015 10:14:00 PM

only Love can inspire hope....only hope can make us cope....when we cope can we truly survive....and as we survive, we remain Alive....;)

James Inman

Date: 8/12/2015 9:28:00 AM

Sweetly done.

Thomas Martin

Date: 8/11/2015 5:55:00 PM

As usual, so exquisite!!!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/10/2015 6:25:00 PM

Your descriptive is very brilliant, it is lovely and intriguing.. Good luck.....A.M.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2015 3:30:00 PM

Just choosing one, you have provided us with a beautiful gem, Constance. Better one superb one than three not so superb!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/10/2015 2:19:00 PM

a love like this is magical, constance... so beautifully composed.. huggs

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/10/2015 7:12:00 AM

Whew!! VERY nice entry for the contest my friend, written with your trademark style and elegance...Me-thinks you've got a winner here - Tim

James Inman

Date: 8/9/2015 9:06:00 PM

Lovely poem BW.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/9/2015 2:22:00 AM

Nice one: I was a hog. I posted every one I had, LOL SuZ

Jan Allison

Date: 8/9/2015 2:01:00 AM

a beautiful love poem Broken wings - good luck:-) hugs jan xx

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/9/2015 1:40:00 AM

A very beautiful poem, it is so romantic and penned with wisdom.........A.M.

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/8/2015 9:56:00 PM

Love and its promise truly is delicate, it holds its balance on the scales of truth..a strong poem ..good luck in the contest