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Random Thoughts *7* a Rondelet

*Rondelet* Rhyme scheme AbAabbA Happy days! Better than days I'm blue Happy days! I have a smile on my face As a friend I am true As an amateur poet I grew Happy days! Jared Pickett 9/7/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 12/9/2009 7:11:00 AM
Not bad....Dad
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Date: 9/11/2009 8:55:00 PM
Excellent, thoughts, here Jared, happy and true, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/8/2009 1:39:00 AM
Nice form and work. I liked the 6th line...Raul
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