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Miss N.Y.C. Double Etheree 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 -----No -romance, -----promoting her deep longing, --------------sexuality. -----------Only casually. --Occasionally, my creep. ------I am her vanilla creamer, blended well with her cappuccino -----influence, sweet, stirred by my ********! ------------Mayor of my world, sole candidate ---in this election. Love injected. --------Definition of perfection. her body recites a verse, softly singing to me. -----Lovely poetry, ------stimulating ---- melody. romance? NO!!!! Jared Pickett 10/5/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 10/10/2009 10:31:00 AM
Delightful read Jared >> James
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Date: 10/9/2009 7:46:00 AM
Hi Jared, This is different. Great visual from start to finsh here. Pretty brave too, LOL. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing and for your most welcome comments. Have a inspiring weekend! Thanks for sharing. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 10/8/2009 2:12:00 PM
sexy, just a little romace?:)
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Date: 10/8/2009 9:05:00 AM
Never seen this form. Interesting topic. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/6/2009 3:24:00 PM
wow.... that was... interesting......
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Date: 10/5/2009 10:49:00 PM
Vanilla creamer you're quite a seducer.. you made me smile Jared and i love the-ending romance?No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sweet write--Charma
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Date: 10/5/2009 7:23:00 PM
"I am her vanilla creamer, blended well with her cappuccino influence, sweet, stirred by my erection" great lines, nice work as always...Raul
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