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Somehow in the late of nighttime, a wooden door's front lantern brings me to a table where strangers from a distant tavern grow more animated with a litany of stories and ramblings inscribed on their life’s hinges. Varied tones reminisce detailed inlays of personal anthologies framing their eyes with joy or regret, etched by languid memories as I listen to orations of wise men and laborers where intimacies are safe inside a door... each one relating a brew of sentiments over mugs of ale and wine. Just then, I hear my own man’s language reflected through the crowd’s noises, piercing my flesh with a tinge of awareness... while opening the doorknob, I begin to search for him under a vault of moonbeam, reminded now of the times I forget to understand his longing to connect with me ,to embrace his thoughts deeply in silence...without question or restraint. --------- 6/21/2015 rob carmack's Screwed V Theme: door

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/20/2015 12:48:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome poem n win nette! As beautiful as ever, superb imagery!
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Date: 8/19/2015 4:56:00 PM
Amazing imagery, Nette but also solid and loyal. Congrats on your win, my Dear!xoxo LyLy
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Date: 8/19/2015 1:51:00 AM
Nette.... Wonderful win... SKAT
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Date: 6/23/2015 9:51:00 AM
Such unique flow and choice of words...I can see your name stamped on this write, Nette. You transport the reader to a time and space in such absolute imagery. a 7 and a fav! huggs!
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Date: 6/21/2015 11:38:00 PM
This is incredible, sensual, and captivating in all the right ways, Nette! Best wishes in the contest...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 6/21/2015 8:25:00 PM
Nette, beautifully penned poem for the contest, 7 and thanks for my wonderful placement in your through your eyes contest, I am so honored
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Date: 6/21/2015 2:18:00 PM
This perceptive poem stands out across a crowded room. You just brought me there, amazed by the murmurs and silence of a language definitely just yours!
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Date: 6/21/2015 12:35:00 PM
- Dear Nette, this is a beautiful poem - I wish you luck in the contest, I give it a clear 7 !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/21/2015 12:29:00 PM
Nette, I am confident John will embrace this brilliant entry. Your work always inspires me. I hope you have someone in your life who appreciates your talent, if not, it is their great loss. I loved this piece! 7
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