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Ramblings Fixin life in dreams, reminiscent of other worldliness’. If we dream it, CAN we be it? Would it not be wondrous to live out and succeed some of our greatest dreams of success, while maintaining harmony, prosperity, and balance? moonlike utopia many humans seek accord dreams of peace and love This world is so ugly, it lends reason to open minds and HOPE, at least one realm of the still unseen Universe, in one of the infinite possibilities, one Rock has achieved the state of Zen, achieving balance. And would your rock please communicate to ours A.S.A.P. and mentor Earth before it just implodes due to hatred, intolerance, and ignorance! These are unacceptable World circumstances for the present time. wise always questions valid compromise exist like minds motivate 11/16/2015

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Date: 11/17/2015 4:43:00 PM
Jill, I really like your haibun, many awesome lines, best of luck in the contest ~
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Constance La France
Date: 11/17/2015 4:59:00 PM
of course you can, that would be nice ~
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 11/17/2015 4:55:00 PM
Thank you, may I call you Constance?
Date: 11/17/2015 5:11:00 AM
Hi Jill. Very thought provoking and written in a very natural way. "would your rock please communicate to ours A.S.A.P. and mentor Earth before it just implodes due to hatred, intolerance, and ignorance!" Loved how you expressed yourself here, Jill. If this is for the contest, let me wish you the best. hugs!
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 11/17/2015 3:48:00 PM
I went ahead and entered, i was unaware of it! Thanks Kim xo...
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 11/17/2015 2:46:00 PM
No contest but thank you for the encouragement. I really love the way you comment on my slightly 'different' ways of writing. thank you and lots of hugs Kim...:), jill

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