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Raindrops On My Window

Young lad in his bedroom sitting in his favourite chair looking out showers outdoors seeing raindrops made to stare Eyes fixed on the glass watches lines run down straight liquid soaking wet truly fixed mind catches all on plate desire within never move away held in rapture colours grey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/31/2016 6:58:00 AM
Beautiful ...
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/31/2016 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Probir!
Date: 8/31/2016 4:24:00 AM
Yeah, watching the raindrops can be mesmerising:) beautiful ending lines :)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/31/2016 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Jo, glad you enjoyed it, indeed they can!

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