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Raindrops Around Your Dimples

Even the raindrops love to linger on your face like my fingers' tip-toeing, drop by drop they reach around your naughty dimples luscious lips are not too far..... ====================

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/23/2012 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "#184" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2012 7:33:00 PM
this one is SO awesome. I am sure I must have seen it before, but you have so many comments they go on to another page! Congratulations. You picked a good one for that contest.
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Date: 6/21/2012 6:07:00 PM
super congrats Kash on a wonderful winning poem luv.. how r u?
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Date: 6/21/2012 2:27:00 PM
So playfully charming! I especially love line 1. Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
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Date: 6/21/2012 1:51:00 PM
yeahooo!.. congrats, bud!!...:)
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Date: 6/21/2012 11:42:00 AM
Wow..kash ,congratulations with your wonderful win in Brian's contest... Take care pd... ;-)
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Date: 6/21/2012 2:50:00 AM
Nice, sensual poem...wonderful... congratulations on your new wim! Terry
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:52:00 PM
KASH... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 3/1/2012 3:45:00 PM
some one loves someone very much! Light & Love
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Date: 2/29/2012 10:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win! I am honored to share the spot with you. I also wanted to give you a big thank you for making me one of your faves. You are one of my favorite poets as well. I'm not sure if I had told you. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/29/2012 4:49:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/29/2012 3:30:00 PM
An excellent write, Kash. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/29/2012 9:15:00 AM
Very artistically done!! Congrats Kash on your excellent win in the "sedoka" contsest...
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Date: 2/29/2012 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Sedoka Me Any Subject" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/29/2012 5:11:00 AM
Yikes :-) so cool to see this one on top Kash! Congratulations to you :)
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Date: 2/28/2012 10:01:00 PM
wowing me up the rooftops, kashi buddy... love this the first time i read it... big cheers to you for the win, yoohoo!..:) hugggs
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Date: 2/28/2012 6:52:00 PM
super congrats Kash on a dynamic first place win for this astounding Sedoka luv..
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Date: 2/28/2012 6:18:00 PM
Gosh, u gotta quit writing poetry about my dimples!! ha ha. I had a strong feeling this sedoka was gonna be a strong contender in Russ's contest...I was right as usual. Congrats to you again, Kash. Gwendolen
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Date: 2/28/2012 5:11:00 PM
Passionate..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/28/2012 4:12:00 AM
Conjours up a romantic scene. Delightful read...
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Date: 2/26/2012 11:37:00 AM
Hey there kash, this one's another romantic write from you! You sure do well in these kinds of writes... Congrats btw on all your wins! Thanks as well for the congrats!
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Date: 2/26/2012 10:48:00 AM
great idea. love the "fingers tip-toeing" - great visual and "naughty dimples" to show seduction :) good luck in the contest!
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Date: 2/26/2012 8:06:00 AM
Super cute! OOhh, I love this poem! :) Favorited!
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Date: 2/26/2012 7:23:00 AM
This one has such an amazing feel to it.. Can't help to smile while reading it. :) soupmail returned
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Date: 2/25/2012 12:42:00 PM
Adorable and no doubt a winner. Love, Joyce
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