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Raindrops

Raindrops Trickling down, quaint Window-panes a little wet Swift steps homeward There’s a shed, let’s stand under it Raindrops Enhanced Lashing your body Sky turned hazy, treetops in enchanted dance Lashing your body An ethereal pair Sharing a lone umbrella Lashing your body A little space; the girl at your side A whiff of fragrance, her perfume A hypnotising touch of her loose tresses The space reduced, her man drawing her nearer to him The space widened Raindrops lashing your body Raindrops Reducing with the implication of stopping altogether The sky’s clear, the clouds dispersed The road lies before you, The busy footsteps of ant- humanity Raindrops Now in your heart

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Date: 10/10/2014 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your very lovely winning poem.
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Prasenjit Banerjee
Date: 10/13/2014 9:21:00 AM
Thanks for the encouraging comment... Prasenjit
Date: 10/10/2014 8:37:00 AM
- I enjoy reading your lovely and well written poem, Prasenjit ! - Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest! - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Prasenjit Banerjee
Date: 10/13/2014 9:23:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, thanks for your compliments. Prasenjit
Date: 10/10/2014 6:27:00 AM
I enjoyed this romantic write, Prasenjit, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/10/2014 4:52:00 AM
wonderful imagery in this romantic write. many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/10/2014 3:30:00 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend Prasenjit. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
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