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Rainbow In My Sky

Rainbow in my sky after a fresh smiling rain.... dimple of your face your smile the painter choose from violet to red.... canvas mind ready this sky is touch-screen waiting for touch of your smile.... paint me in rainbow © kashinath karmakar (20th June 2011) ==============000============= Placement:10th (July 2011 2011) Contest:Assignment Contest Sponsor:PD

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2011 8:27:00 PM

WAy to go, Kash. WE haiku guys are toward the bottom but at least we didn't do the hard assignments. heehee. Nice seeing another win for you. LUv, andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/12/2011 11:36:00 AM

Really enjoyed your take on rainbows, here Kashinath-- very interesting that "touch screen" one :) Congrats on your win :D

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/12/2011 11:33:00 AM

So romantic, Kash, and I love the way you describe waiting for her smile to touch your sky's screen and paing a rainbor smile. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/12/2011 5:15:00 AM

Congrats Kash on your exciting win with this dazzling assignment my friend.. u surely met the challenge of the contest..now enjoy KUDOS..luv.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2011 5:12:00 AM

Congratulations Kashinath on your win in the "Assignment" contest of P.D. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/12/2011 4:15:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., kashinath

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/12/2011 12:55:00 AM

wow, kashi..swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2011 12:46:00 AM

Kash,,Congratulations on a poem well done! Thank you for supporting my contest~ I sure enjoyed every entry,..p.d.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/27/2011 7:35:00 PM

I would say these are all free verse they are too complex and intellectual, they are not a simple snap shot of a scene in nature and they are using personification, you want "simple as porridge" and to SHOW a snapsht of a [moment] without you telling the reader how to feel about the moment. Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/21/2011 12:53:00 PM

You have a gentle and loving heart, Kash, and it really shines in this beautiful haiku series. I love that you see her "smile" as the painter! Best wishes in PD's contet, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2011 11:01:00 PM

I like the smile/rainbow theme running thru it. That is really cool comparing sky to touch-screen. I think the first one I liked best!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/20/2011 10:04:00 AM

Very romantic and passionate expressions, kASHINATH

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/20/2011 8:20:00 AM

lovely romantic write Kashinath.. light hearted and airy and full of vibrancy luv.. good luck in the contest by PD.. a gem of a jewel..luv..