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Below is the poem entitled Rainbow which was written by poet Ken Carroll. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Her love
is like water

I fall in it
drown in it

live without it

Her love
forms a pool
of clear water

where light plays

She is
spring rain

on the rain

rain falling
on sunshine

a rainbow to form

flowers to grow

if this made a sound
it would be her laughter

adding color
to my sunset sky...

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  1. Date: 3/7/2014 3:38:00 PM
    Hi Ken, Once again your soft words and gentle heart bring forth a beautiful canvas before our eyes. You always bring forth your vision in such gentle words that seep so effortlessly into the heart of the reader. No matter whether the piece be small or larger it makes no difference, you hold the readers attention all the way through. You have definately all left me behind. It is indeed an honour to call you friend. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 3/7/2014 4:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading this one Mike..
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 7:05:00 PM
    this is a very clever and creative way to show what is in your heart. Lots of emotion and love portrayed. good job

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/25/2013 7:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Robin, Thank you for the lovely comment.. Ken
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 1:32:00 PM
    A very refreshing and calming poem to read! Very nicely done, I really enjoyed it, Ken!...Thank you for the nice comments on my poem, "The Shy Rose". It really means so much!

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/5/2013 1:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    HI Kelly, Thank you for reading this one..I enjoy your writings as well.. Ken
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 9:30:00 AM
    A lovely title.... thanks... :-)....:-)... LINDA

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 8/26/2013 9:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Paloma, Thank you.. Besos, Ken
  1. Date: 7/28/2013 9:46:00 AM
    Kenneth, adding color to your sky. a very charming way of announcing the way she makes your heart feel... another spellbound moment thank you so much... I know this is out of the sudden... Kenneth, you have yourself a new fan... have yourself a good one, my new favorite poet... luv ~Linda

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 7/28/2013 10:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Gracias mi Linda...I have added you to my favorite poets list...I am your fan as well...Your writing reaches me as it displays a beautiful heart...I wish to share more with you... Ken