Rainbow

I saw something beautiful today It reminded me of you A Rainbow A bridge across the sky, from here to eternity Bathed in radiant warmth serentiy filled my heart, my soul Colors, soft, vibrant to behold The essence of lift itself Embraced by its beauty I felt it, it touched me Fading slowly before my eyes those colors became the sky For a moment in time forever in my heart Precious Rainbow (Dedicated to Dr. George Brown)

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Crystal Cross

Date: 5/19/2010 8:25:00 PM

enjoyed reading it. thank you for commenting on my poem, the poetry formula. I fully agree with you when you say 'inspiration must hit me" for I agree with you. most of my poems are very personal. no writing on command for me. :)

James Fraser

Date: 8/30/2009 11:41:00 PM

Delightful poem Karla, Rainbows are beautiful sights. If only i can find the start of it, just to see if there is a pot of gold there to share>>James

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/30/2009 8:38:00 AM

beautiful tribute! Karla! jimmy

Ashley Beaudre

Date: 8/20/2009 9:39:00 PM

Haha what a coonicidence, we both wrote a poem about a rainbow!

John Freeman

Date: 8/19/2009 7:19:00 PM

Amazingly beautiful poem, Karla, thanks for sharing, Sincerely Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/19/2009 5:31:00 AM

I missed reading so many extremely outstanding poems yesterday. I hope to get them read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Karla.Beautiful dedication. Love, Carol

Orphani ..........O

Date: 8/19/2009 2:22:00 AM

this poem is quite special-electric and majestic yet it is a child waiting the revisions that place on it's beautiful yet naked form the reigment of a queen-- for such she is--i bow o