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Rain and Reasons

Stone black is the park at will But cool is the night That gleams across a lone hill Oak decked in white With moistened twigs nearly bare Clinging the pond Windblown by misty air Tells me I am bound For one early morning rain Languid in repose Pounding on an incised pain Bench without a rose This heart trickles as it sits A throb that heaves For drenched flower that wilts Upon dark moon’s eaves Oh the park knows my longing Tasting all seasons That drape souvenirs’ mourning In rain and reasons ..... *inspired by the title of Lightfoot's song, "Early Morning Rain" by nette onclaud Francine Roberts’ Write Me a Lightfoot Poem

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Date: 6/21/2012 1:19:00 PM
I am unable to open my soupmail inbox just now....due to some problem with the browser.You give any message that u want at my old poem if you want an immediate reply......kash
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Date: 5/9/2012 1:42:00 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Nette. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/6/2012 10:56:00 AM
thanks for entering nette, and congrats on your fourth place win
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Date: 5/4/2012 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Lightfoot" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2012 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations Nette!! Well Done!! big hugs, love ya deb
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Date: 5/3/2012 11:30:00 PM
as per contest rules, the title selected must be listed as a footnote on the bottom of the entry (even if obvious) since I have already badgered others about this kindly edit, I am postponing judging for the moment
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Date: 5/2/2012 6:16:00 PM
Beautiful poem Nette. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/2/2012 12:37:00 AM
you sure got a good one out of the Lightfoot song, Nette. Awesome picture to go with it, it really sets the mood you created.
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Date: 5/1/2012 5:03:00 PM
Oh Nette, you have piqued my senses greatly and have pleased my emotions completely! This is an incredible and magnificent write my friend! Your images were fascinating and pleasing to the visions in my mind! These are perfect ideas you have presented and instilled within us all! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem that I have read this evening!! Great Work!!
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Date: 5/1/2012 9:59:00 AM
The metaphors are lovely...the poem moist as the cleansing rain. How simply splendid this is !!!
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Date: 5/1/2012 8:15:00 AM
Beautifully done Nette!! :) Good Luck in the contest! big hugs, love ya~deb
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Date: 5/1/2012 7:14:00 AM
Unique, nette, L O V E it..... - Wish you luck in contest!!!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/1/2012 4:48:00 AM
On the whole, it looks a smoothly flowing creation, enjoyed, jag
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Date: 4/30/2012 11:54:00 PM
An amazing poem here by you Nette.Love the imagery very much!Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 4/30/2012 10:17:00 PM
Breath taking Nette, There is a lot of depth her Huggs TLee
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